1.I got up earlier.改为I got up early.
2.The birds are singing in the trees.时态前后不符合，应该为一个过去进行时的句子 The birds were singing in the trees.
3.The sky is blue.改为The sky was blue.最好加上一个clear
4.The sun is magnificent.改为The sun was magnificent.
5.You can see many flowers and trees in the park.这句话有点突然
6.Some children are playing in the park.时态错误 Some children were playing in the park.
主要问题还是时态不正确，继续加油
小颖子 于 2005-1-24 17:06:00回复如下：
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1.We very like our house .
应该为We like our house very much.
2.There are three bedroom
应该为There are three bedrooms.
3. My parents bedroom is very big .
应该为My parents' bedroom is very big
4.You can see two map of the worlds and a certificate of
merit on the wall .
应该为You can see two maps of the world and a certificate of merit on the wall .
小颖子 于 2005-1-24 17:58:00回复如下：
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有语法错误
Besides , I very very enjoy eating strawberries .
because, it’s very juicy .
应该是they're very juicy吧
还有 I want to be a famous swimming
？？？
小颖子 于 2005-1-24 17:59:00回复如下：
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