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A Beautiful Park


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  Yesterday, I had a good time
 
   Yesterday morning ,I got up earlier. The birds are singing     小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 
   After  breakfast ,My mother and I went to the local park.     
Everything was beautiful.The sky is blue.The sun is magnificent.You can see many flowers and trees in the park.Some children   
 are playing in the park.I saw many boats on the lake at the  
foot of the hills. Later on , mother and I played hide-and-seek in the park.  
 
   Yesterday, I had a good time.  
   
(第一次写英语作文,多提建议,特别是病句和错词,请指出来吆!)  

 
 
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