YANYUTING(来自 221.229.216.*)于 2005-3-15 12:40:00
不错,继续加油!我期待你的下一篇,相信下一篇,会比这一篇更好!~~
1.I got up earlier.改为I got up early.
2.The birds are singing in the trees.时态前后不符合，应该为一个过去进行时的句子 The birds were singing in the trees.
3.The sky is blue.改为The sky was blue.最好加上一个clear
4.The sun is magnificent.改为The sun was magnificent.
5.You can see many flowers and trees in the park.这句话有点突然
6.Some children are playing in the park.时态错误 Some children were playing in the park.
主要问题还是时态不正确，继续加油
小颖子 于 2005-1-24 17:06:00回复如下：
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水若悠(来自 222.182.247.*)于 2005-1-15 19:55:00
好,加油,只是我有些英语不会,现在我也要学英语了,我为你加油,继续努力我期待你的下一篇.
小颖子 于 2005-1-15 22:10:00回复如下：
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我每星期写一篇。
