From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons. In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both drivers dont show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of another. Therefore, the accident is inevitable. So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer. Taking care of others lives means taking care of your own life.
东方教育点评：（1）切题。
（2）表达清楚，描述详细生动。
（3）文字通顺，连贯性较好。
（4）基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
注： 文中划线部分为原文的一些明显语言错误，括号里的为修改建议，为保持原文面貌，对于结构没有做过多改动。
2003年6月考试六级作文题：Changes of Ownership of Houses in China图表作文，图表内容是1990，1995，2000的公房和私房变化柱状表，趋势是公房越来越少，私房越来越多。
提纲：1.简单描述一下图表内容
2.变化原因
3.这个变化对个人和社会的影响
例1． （2分段）
此分段标准为条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有严重错误。
为了不影响市容，给大家造成负面影响，故此处略去100字……
例2．（5分段）
It is descerned that（删掉）the number of pirate（private） houses had been on a（an） increase from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was about 20 percent; In 1995 it was 40 percent; In 2000, it was 80 percent.
There were some reasons for this fact. One of them was the improvement of peoples living conditions（condition）, all people wanted to own pirate houses.