真的让人很惊讶啊！！

不好意思，没有看懂，但是看完一遍之后，觉得可以打精品！

Becaose I can see many curioes in the Summer Palace.
Becaose应该是because.
我确实是14上初三，不瞒你，我们班还有12的呢！
而且14岁上初三有不早！

很抱歉，我打了退稿，，你可以认真检查一下，有很多错误。

我觉得如果你认真些，那么有些词语就不会打错了。

I live it. "I like it ."
.I always do my homework at here,,把at去掉，here是副词不用介词。

你在学校是老师还是学生？

　Great changes have taken piace in people’s life in past 20 years. 　 piace应该是place.

What pet it is? 应该是What is it?

deffirent.应该是different. english应该是English.
写得很好啊。是 Joy English School培养出来得英语精英啊。

we gave mother e surprise. e应该是a.虽然是小错误还是要注意。poto chips应该是potato chips。orange应该加s。
有些句子开头没有大写。　The yesterday is the nicer in all birthday应该把the去掉。mother say.应该加s。最后一节你希望有大写来表达你的你妈妈强烈的爱，但是是错误的，英语和汉语不同。。
有大小写要求。。请注意哦！！！

I have many flowers and trees in my graden..我觉得应该是
There are many trees and flowers in my graden.

　I think it is very happy.如果翻译就是“我认为它（唱歌）很开心。”应该改为Ithink it is interesting .“我认为唱歌很有趣。

我觉得用英语写作文可以提高我们的组织能力。所以我认为写英语作文没有什么不好，而且如果有人不懂英语，可以让作者在下面附上中文翻译。
his name is called Tim 　 。应该改为His name is Tim.
我支持你写英语作文

可以把翻译也写上。

Every has many friends.
开头应该是everyone

There are a lot of people who are ggod at playing it.
ggod应该改为good.