不太好哦，第一段的句子许多都没有大写，初二的学生写出这等文章，应该努力了。谢谢！

对对对，学多单词写错了。

许多单词打错了！应该是：
　 Mike comes from America. He is twelve. his father Mr. Brown works in a big shop in Beijing. Mike has a sister. Her name is Kate. She is only four. 　
　　It is Sunday（Saturday） today. Mike’s family is all at home. Mr. Brown is sitting in a chair and reading today’s newspaper. Mrs. Brown is out of the house; she is watering the flowers. Is Mike with his mother? No, he is cleaning his new bike. Where is Kite? She is in her room. She is playing with her cat.
What a happy family! 　

m应该大写。他有快乐家庭，我也是。

very good! Do you like English?

Very Good(但是开头错误了~)

````汗`发这个干什么``
能说的被月说了``加油吧`!!