ALEXEA(来自 111.207.1.*)于 2015-3-26 17:55:52
Be attention and take good care of ourselves please,because our lives are not only belongs to us but also belongs to our family.
//attention是名词。可改attentioned 或者把be改pay
belong是动词，去掉are 而且是复数 去掉s,belong.
最后那个回报。replies是回复的意思。可以是feed back之类的……
加油~总体比较顺畅
LIYONGFEI 于 2015-3-26 21:50:00回复如下：
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thanks.mistakes are the access to the future progress.yes,come on!
