同学你好，小学六年级有如此词汇量非常了不起。不过你的整篇文章，语法错误非常多。还有很多句子，有点让人看不懂愿意，比方说“Remember he came to us in this class we dare not speak, because the new teacher come with evil intent, at least good when everyone thinks so.” 我给你的建议是，不要尝试写这么长的句子，试着让每个句子尽量简短化。