GARYFORD(来自 111.112.203.*)于 2012-7-13 11:31:00
嗯，写的还不错。
Sheis very clever with his hands
and can fix almost anything
我认为can前面缺了主语。
In study she is good, too
好像有点中国式英语。改成She does well in her schoolwork.
或She is good at study.
陈怡一 于 2013-4-21 7:03:00回复如下：
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谢谢提出修改的意见哦~
我会注意在之后的文中修改语法点的错误的~
