970318(来自 114.106.113.*)于 2012-7-1 16:12:00
提个建议：
I like to play football with my classmates. 应改为 I like playing football with my classmates.
I love my teachers. I love my school 应该为 I love my teachers and school.
写得不错呦，通俗易懂
I want to make a friend with you.
余其 于 2013-4-20 18:45:00回复如下：
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OK！
