心理刻画和环境描写蛮不错的，不过有一些错别字和病句。

一季繁华、

A quarter of downtown,

留下的始终是落寞

left is always lonely

漂泊的雨季、

Wandering in rainy season,

只愿看见那寥寥雨雾中

See the little rain and fog

蹁跹起舞的樱花

Whirling dance cherry

因为、更确切地说是请记住

Because, more precisely, please remember

它们承载的是风迁

They are carrying the wind moved

而不是苦涩的泪水

Instead of bitter tears

愿风吹逝夏季

May the wind passing summer

吹逝我所最爱的蒲公英

Blow away my love dandelion

虽然它是那么的纯白

Although it is so white

那么的耀眼

So bright

但那么多的那么

But so much so

只是属于过去

Only belong to the past