575269(来自 58.40.194.*)于 2007-10-14 20:57:00
my a day 语法错误
祁诗盈(来自 61.242.155.*)于 2007-5-2 16:29:00
题目好像有点问题，不是吧？
林峰(来自 60.180.110.*)于 2006-2-11 15:30:00
哥哥可以把译文发给我吗?我想看看自己理解的对不对!
小灵童 于 2006-2-12 10:03:00回复如下：
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见纸条~
上官灵儿(来自 222.171.74.*)于 2006-2-9 12:41:00
I have art,it’s boring,I don’t it.是不是应该是I don’t like it.呢?题目我决得用MY DAILY LIFE 更好些~
小灵童 于 2006-2-12 9:49:00回复如下：
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谢谢！
看了哥哥你修改完的文章，觉得读起来很通畅。
小灵童 于 2006-2-1 17:17:00回复如下：
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谢谢！
盈莹(来自 59.34.110.*)于 2006-1-27 20:44:00
我觉得题目好象不太对哦！应该用my day哦！请把中文意思通过纸条发给我，我想看看！
小灵童 于 2006-2-1 17:15:00回复如下：
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见纸条~
有一处好象错了哥~
面包不能用复数，这是不可数名词~
小灵童 于 2006-1-23 9:16:00回复如下：
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谢谢妹妹！
QIN(来自 221.229.228.*)于 2006-1-21 21:38:00
哥哥的英语好棒啊!支持你+4~~
小灵童 于 2006-1-22 11:29:00回复如下：
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Thank you !!!
赢博(来自 218.106.84.*)于 2006-1-21 13:54:00
my one day
I usually get up at 6:00.First of all, I wash my face and brush my teeth.At 7:00,ThenI have a breakfast, There are an egg,three slices of breads and a cup of milk. Last,I go to school at 7:20.
My class starts at 8:00.In the morning,I’m really busy.For example:At 8:05,I have a math class,it’s interesting.Then at 9:10,I have a Chinese class ,and I like it very much.Next, at 10:05,I have a art class ,and it’s boring, so I don’t like it.But at 11:00,I have music,it’s relaxing for us .
I have a lunch,it’s very delicious.After lunch,I have two classes.They are funny.I have dinner,I need some vegetables,some meat and dumplings.
At 19:00,I have to do my homework,but I like doing my homework,because it can make me get lots of knowledges.At 21:00,I go to bed on time.
This is my one day.
注：只是修改了文章中的一些错误与漏洞之处，未添油加醋了。
小灵童 于 2006-1-22 22:31:00回复如下：
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谢谢评点！
赢博(来自 218.106.84.*)于 2006-1-21 13:50:00
My one day
I usually get up at 6:00.First of all, I wash my face and brush my teeth.At 7:00,ThenI have a breakfast, There are an egg,three slices of breads and a cup of milk. Last,I go to school at 7:20.
My class starts at 8:00.In the morning,I’m really busy.For example:At 8:05,I have a math class,it’s interesting.Then at 9:10,I have a Chinese class ,and I like it very much.Next, at 10:05,I have a art class ,and it’s boring, so I don’t like it.But at 11:00,I have music,it’s relaxing for us .
I have a lunch,it’s very delicious.After lunch,I have two classes.They are funny.I have dinner,I need some vegetables,some meat and dumplings.
At 19:00,I have to do my homework,but I like doing my homework,because it can make me get lots of knowledges.At 21:00,I go to bed on time.
This is my one day.
只是修改了文章中的一些错误与漏洞之处，未添油加醋了。
小灵童 于 2006-1-21 23:57:00回复如下：
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有劳你了，真地非常感谢。看得出，你的英语很棒，做个朋友好吗？以后还请你多指教呢！
XINGQIHUI(来自 59.32.115.*)于 2006-1-21 13:19:00
我认为“some meat and some dumplings”后面的“some”可以不写，就是“some meat and dumplings”。建议“I have dinner……”可以独自一段，这样比较清晰。哥哥很棒哦，加油！
小灵童 于 2006-1-21 13:35:00回复如下：
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Thank you very much !!!
微微雪(来自 221.237.50.*)于 2006-1-21 9:45:00
是不是你的作息时间表啊？我认为你的题目可以去掉“a”
小灵童 于 2006-1-21 11:53:00回复如下：
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对！
赢博(来自 218.106.84.*)于 2006-1-21 9:37:00
我的修改
小灵童 于 2006-1-22 22:33:00回复如下：
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谢谢评点！
赢博(来自 218.106.84.*)于 2006-1-21 9:36:00
错误不少，应注意修改以及语法方面内容。
小灵童 于 2006-1-22 22:33:00回复如下：
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谢谢评点！
赢博(来自 218.106.84.*)于 2006-1-21 9:36:00
错误不少，应注意修改以及语法方面内容。
小灵童 于 2006-1-21 11:53:00回复如下：
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谢谢提醒！
雨中承诺(来自 219.130.208.*)于 2006-1-21 8:03:00
小灵童 修改后就通顺好多了。不过你写的也很好。我也要向你学习哦。
小灵童 于 2006-1-21 11:52:00回复如下：
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谢谢！
小灵童(来自 60.1.98.*)于 2006-1-20 22:53:00
《My day》修改：
My day
I usually get up at 6:00.Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.At 7:00,I have breakfast,I need an egg,three slices of breads and a cup of milk.I go to school at 7:20.My school starts at 8:00.In the morning,I’m really busy.At 8:05,I have math,it’s interesting.Then at 9:10,I have Chinese,I like it very much.Next, at 10:05,I have art,it’s boring,I don’t like it.But at 11:00,I have music,it’s relaxing.I have lunch,it’s delicious.After lunch,I have two classes.They are funny.I have dinner,I need some vegetables,some meat and some dumplings.At 19:00,I do my homework,I like doing homework,because it can make stronger my knowledge.At 21:00,I go to bed on time.
This is my day.
JOEY(来自 59.34.110.*)于 2006-1-20 22:43:00
題目不對吖～～my day就行啦，不用my a day
小灵童 于 2006-1-20 22:57:00回复如下：
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非常感谢提意见！！！
梦幻白天使(来自 59.59.107.*)于 2006-1-20 22:33:00
什么意思？能不能给我翻译一下·！！我看不懂也！！
小灵童 于 2006-1-20 22:55:00回复如下：
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见纸条。
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