月亮忧伤(来自 123.150.197.*)于 2011-5-3 15:09:00
And I am very clever 你在自夸吗
I am a best student in my school 谦虚一点
dilitios for me 食物这个词哪去了
When I bad 应该是ILL生病吧
she always doesn’t go to work 改为:she never go to work
sometimes she takes me to the hospital . 这句话不要写
This is my mum .这句话要加修饰成分