碧水灵儿(来自 222.33.169.*)于 2005-12-27 18:25:00
你有点粗心啊，题目都写错了，应该是：Spring,Summer, Fall and Winter ，还有文章中很多地方都有错误，除了错误之外，你写的基本上和书上是一样的，你应该自己多写几句话，有兴趣希望你看看我的作文，互相切磋一下也好啊，你没有写译文，年级低的同学就看不懂了，下次你最好写译文，努力，加油！！！
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HAPPY77(来自 61.128.234.*)于 2005-12-8 22:02:00
In March ,Spring returns and things comes back to life .The weather gets warmer and warmer .Spring is a hopeful season.
Sunmmer begins in June.The weather is very hot, it often rains and sometimes,it rains heavily.
Fall comes after Summer .This is the harvest season .Fruit and crops are ripe, the farmers are busy harvesting, it’s cool in fall and the cold weather is soon coming.
Then the coldest season in the year---Winter comes, it lasts from December to February. We all wear warm clothes.Most of the leaves fall from the trees .Sometimes it snows.
粗略地改了改.希望发表前多看几遍.题目也写错了.不要以为是英语就可以随便取.你见过<春天,夏天,秋天,冬天>这个题目吗?不过四季的特点描写得不错.继续努力.
珊妮 于 2005-12-9 19:10:00回复如下：
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