May 12th is(was) the most unforgettable day of my life. Maybe it is(was) the most unforgettable (day) of all Chinese’s lives. 　
　On that day, a huge earthquake happened in Sichuan. It destroyed nearly everything in Wenchuan. It was so terrible that we couldn’t describe the disaster with any(only) words. Thousands of people were injured and (some of them) even died. 　
　However, love is(was always) around us. When I saw the(\) soldiers save people who were under the stone without any rest,(;) when I heard all people donate money to Sichuan.(,) I was moved. 　
　As a saying goes“Unity is strength”(,) I really know life is wonderful with so many people’s love.　 　

last sentence should be" I know life is really wonderful with all thoese ultimate loves"