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陈华娜(来自 61.141.172.*)于 2009-11-20 18:11:00   
整篇文章都是别人的故事,没自己的感受。
紫清墨弦(来自 220.180.24.*)于 2009-8-25 10:40:00   
“不相等的三分”被你打成了“不想等的三分”了
小舟公主(来自 221.2.59.*)于 2007-7-15 20:06:00   
错字多!
辛佳潞(来自 124.132.168.*)于 2007-6-3 9:37:00   
本文有许多处错误,我发现的就有三处:
他只留下一幢小房子、一头牛、一枝他常吹的木笛和一粮食、金钱。
他们有把粮食和金钱分成不想等的三分。
忽然,桥伊想。
上面的错误改正后应该是一袋粮食,不相等,乔伊。
AZ10(来自 220.176.183.*)于 2006-11-25 20:18:00   
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67266594(来自 218.87.8.*)于 2006-8-1 15:34:00   
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选择的话(来自 211.162.42.*)于 2005-5-26 19:35:00   
抄的`?
选择的话(来自 211.162.42.*)于 2005-5-26 19:35:00   
加油噢`!!!
CHANGYUE(来自 211.93.47.*)于 2004-12-29 19:57:00   
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郑HAO1010(来自 219.133.202.*)于 2004-2-29 15:38:00   
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SHAOYI(来自 218.109.181.*)于 2003-11-1 15:10:00   
"他们有把粮食和金钱分成不想等的三分”的“不想等”打错了,是“不相等’
JIYI6666(来自 220.186.56.*)于 2003-9-21 16:54:00   
“不相等的三分”被你打成了“不想等的三分”了
王芊芊(来自 218.76.8.*)于 2003-6-29 16:36:00   
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