宇宙风(来自 122.194.163.*)于 2009-8-23 18:59:00
并且,LISBOA：复数后面不是year old,而是years old!
比思 于 2010-4-10 20:47:00回复如下：
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thank you
宇宙风(来自 122.194.185.*)于 2009-8-14 19:27:00
其中有错误欧~~~~
一：开头要大写欧~~
二：she is 15.(岁数后面加years old)
修改：She is 15 years old.
三：because my house near hers.(her的翻译是：她的,后面不加s,就算加,也只加"’s".)
修改：Because my house near her house.
四：do you want to know what she loks like?(是looks,不是loks!)
修改：Do you want to know what she looks like?
比思 于 2010-9-4 22:32:00回复如下：
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非常谢谢你,很感谢.
宇宙风(来自 122.194.185.*)于 2009-8-14 19:18:00
偶也写了一篇：My good friend
Hello! Today is nice and warm! My name is Zheng Han Bai ,I have a good friend.His name is Dou Dao Xin.Dou Dao Xin and I study in the same primary school.
Dou Dao Xin 13 years old,and I 11 years old.Dou Dao Xin very like playing computer games,but his father doesn’t like Dou Dao Xin play computer games,pitiful Dou Dao Xin! Dou Dao Xin has two big eyes,one small mouth,a small nose and two ears,he is a beautifully boy.
Dou Dao Xin is very warm-hearted and he always help me.We are all good friend.
比思 于 2010-9-4 22:32:00回复如下：
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非常感谢你.真的很感谢.同时,我深感抱歉,请原谅我.对不起.
