英文不错哦。。只是个别错误要修改一下。。

Look！There are a group of students are climb hill。错了，应该是Look！There are a group of students are climbing hill。才对，这是动态现在进行时。小心一点，继续加油哦！一个六年级的学生写出来这样的文章已经很难得了，继续努力吧！鼓掌！！！！我愿意做你的朋友。

Many kinds of trees i the hill好像打少了，应该是Many kinds of trees in the hill吧，小心一点哦~~

There are very beautiful错了，应该是They are very beautiful的，下次要细心~~加油！

继续努力。