YQER204(来自 218.185.202.*)于 2005-2-17 0:06:00
In summer , I enjoy eating ice-creams,
ice-cream应该是不可数名词,不应该加s
I want to be a famous swimming
应该是I want to be a famous swimmer
小颖子 于 2005-2-17 15:33:00回复如下:
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谢谢你指出我的错误!3Q3Q
有语法错误
Besides , I very very enjoy eating strawberries .
because, it’s very juicy .
应该是they're very juicy吧
还有 I want to be a famous swimming
???
小颖子 于 2005-1-24 17:59:00回复如下:
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