I would like to reply to (make a comment on)the article “helping and learning” in your last newsletter. I agree with some (of the)ideas and disagree with (the rest) others. The article said that students should be allowed do (to) help other! I think it’s a great idea. Because the students will help others change the soul of kindness.(????) But I disagree students should be (were) allowed time to do things like that more often. Because Students learn  (education is)the most important thing is. And I disagree (with the idea that) Middle School Students should be allowed to teach primary school students. Because they are old enough. 　 后两句自相矛盾。

 

我修改了一下。

你们哪来的这么多考场作文！