Because in last week.
in可以去掉。
I classes to "farewell ugly, to civilization" as the theme for a comprehensive practical activities.
这句不通顺。
In previous,应该改成Before或earlier.
孤独恶魔 于 2008-9-8 22:55:00回复如下:
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(*^-^*)谢谢你又来给我点评!
(*^-^*) I thank you for giving me the recommendation great progress