这篇文章正确的写法应该是这样的：
Last Sunday, Xiaoming wanted to play football with his friends, Xiaogang and Xiaoqiang.
While he was going out, his mother was washing clothes. He got to Xiaogang’s home and asked Xiaogang, ”Would you like to go to play football game with me?” But Xiaogang told him he didn’t have time .Because he wanted to wash socks. So Xiaoming get to Xiaoqiang’s home and he saw xiaoqiang washing clothes,too.
So he went back home and said sorry to his mother. After that,he help his mother did housework. His mother told him. He was a good boy .
总的来说，还是不错的，不过，建议你在英文作文里写英文名字．
孤独恶魔 于 2008-8-16 12:04:00回复如下：
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谢谢,我回努力的(^_^)
