I found some mistakes about this article：
1.What does "hive" mean?
2."the dentist isn’t work"is not correct,you can write like that：
the dentist is not on duty/the dentist is not working
3."dentistry hospital"is not correct,you can write like that：
dental clinic
懂了吗?下次要再仔细检查一遍!
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