VAMPIRE13(来自 70.185.108.*)于 2008-6-27 8:18:00
给修改了一下。
My father is very good at maths but he is easy to get angry.My father has big eyes,a small nose and a big mouth. He has long legs and he has big ears. He likes music very much and he likes to wear T-shirts matched with red trousers. He likes purses very much and he likes dogs as well. he doesn’t like to play games or watch TV.
My father is my tutor ,I often ask him questions. My father likes eating fast food so he often goes to buy some fast food.
I love my bad father.
主要存在的问题。
1。断句。
2。选用恰当连词。
小学刘圆圆 于 2008-7-1 9:15:00回复如下:
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thank you!