孤烟一线(来自 124.156.243.*)于 2008-4-13 18:52:00
有错,应改为：I want to be an opera player when I grow up.... Perhaps you are very surprised to hear that...
They are also friendly to me.. ..Reading can help me open my eyes so I like to do that
孤烟一线(来自 124.156.243.*)于 2008-4-13 8:38:00
有错,应改为：I want to be an opera player when I grow up.... Perhaps you are very surprised to hear this ..They are also friendly to me.. ..Reading can help me open my eyes so I like to do that
春意阑珊(来自 59.172.212.*)于 2008-4-12 22:16:00
整体来说还蛮不错的,可是,我给你个建议,文中有错的地方哦.嘿嘿..
