我帮你改了一下。有很多时态，语法，拼写错误。
I have a lot of dreams. I want to be a doctor,a teacher,an astronaut,and a lot more.
I dreamt about being a doctor, because I want to save a lot of people’s lives. And make others healthier.
I dreamt about being a star, {because in other presence show one’s strong suit.}这部分我不知道你想表达什么所以没改。
I dreamt about being an astronaut, because I want to go on the moon.
I dreamt about having a big house with a big swimming pool and {hurst motte wood.}没看懂。 I think it’s very beautiful.
I dreamt about having a beautiful car. It has four doors and blue hall.
After I woke up, I realized it was a dream
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