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茅寒春(来自 125.107.199.*)于 2007-8-10 22:35:00   
I like english deeply,ever or now,even in the future.It’s a pity that I have to face the busy working and living.I think you can be my English teacher.About the title,I regard Chinese more than English for it’s easy to read,and I always think that we can translate the works into other languages if we have written them down in mother tongue.
Give you a big hand for your excellent English.
VAMPIRE13 于 2007-8-11 17:06:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 5)
Thanks for the feedback. i really appreciate it.I'm glad that you do like English too, and you've over estimated my ability. i am just a normal person, like everyone else, except i have great passion and loves English madly. About the tital, i understand, so you mean i should have a Chinese tital.But wont it be weird, to have a chinese tital for a English writing? Anyway, my abilities havent reached till a certain level to allow me translate it into Chinese. As you can see, my chinese isnt that good. And besides, when a piece of work, especially art, turns into a different language, it's hard to express the feeling that i had in the very beggining.
but i'll work hard and someday i will translate all these into Chinese, it might take sometime.
雪海天使(来自 221.226.212.*)于 2007-8-6 17:35:00   
~~很感谢看我的 你的文也挺棒..继续加油哦`..多多写文章吖~` 文~
雪海天使(来自 221.226.212.*)于 2007-8-5 17:20:00   
你不写下去~~~~~~~~~~我`~~撞墙~~~/豆腐墙
VAMPIRE13 于 2007-8-5 19:55:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 2)
我尽量吧
雪海天使(来自 221.226.212.*)于 2007-8-5 17:01:00   
你写的很好看
写长一点ya
VAMPIRE13 于 2007-8-5 19:56:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 2)
谢谢,我会努力的
蓝色的自由(来自 125.79.57.*)于 2007-8-5 16:57:00   
很抱歉,偶米看哒。。
实在是太多了,还都是英文。我的确应该加强英语了,英语在那里都不爱去读,汗。
VAMPIRE13 于 2007-8-5 16:58:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 3)
哎,一般好像都看不懂,没看最好,写得超垃圾!
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