The passage is good, but there are some mistake in it.
First,"She like apples."should be:"She likes to eat apples."
Next,"She also like bananas."should be"She also likes to eat bananas."
Then,the word"rending"is wrong.It should be"reading".
The last,"Do you want to write to my pen friend?"should be"Do you want to write letters or send emails to my pen friend?"
And I think the this sentece is not good. Because you don’t tell us where do her live or email address. How do we write letters to her or send emails to her?
