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ZCCZZC(来自 219.128.82.*)于 2007-2-28 2:55:00   
Nowadays, people are busy learning about the Internet, and how to use it. It is easy to use, its an awesome learning and entertainment tool. So, many people use the Internet every day. Sending E-mail to others has become more and more popular among student. I think the computer has became an important part in people’s life.

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迷宫MM 于 2007-2-28 20:04:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
谢谢~~
HAPPY77(来自 210.80.157.*)于 2007-2-26 15:09:00   
Nowadays, people are busy learning about the Internet, and how to use it. It is easy to use, its an awesome learning and entertainment tool. So, many people use the Internet every day. Sending E-mail to others has become more and more popular among student. I think the computer has became an important part in people’s life.
稍微改了一下。
最后一句也可以是[I think the computer has played an important part in people’s life. ] 
迷宫MM 于 2007-2-26 16:23:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 2)
谢谢你的意见~~
落红霞(来自 60.176.230.*)于 2007-2-26 12:30:00   
刚才纯属小儿之见。。。
迷宫MM 于 2007-2-26 12:56:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
谢谢你的建议~~
落红霞(来自 60.176.230.*)于 2007-2-26 12:29:00   
Now people are busy learning about the Internet..??你能翻译一下吗??。。我读不通句意~~还是把busy改为both..??
迷宫MM 于 2007-2-26 16:22:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
这句话是我上补习班时老师教我的,意思是现在有很多人(忙着)去学习Internet.老师告诉我这是英国当地的语言
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