IT is autumn. The weather is very cool and windy! LeaveS ARE brown. They are fallING. They LOOK like butterflies very much! And, in autumn, we can eat a lot of fruit! So, autumn is a good season! 　
　 Winter comes! Every thing is white! It IS snowING. So winter is beautiful! I can play with THE snow. I can play on the ice. I can make some snowmanS! Some animals sleep in the winter as well. 　
　 I like all seasons! They have nothing in common with each other! I remember a song. It’s “Hello spring! Now it is summer. Autumn is near. Winter is here. Four seasons make a year.”
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Summer IS usually very hot! But summer is a wonderful season. Do you know why?BECAUSE We can swim! There are NOT ANY people on the street. Because they going to SWIM. Look at the swimming pool! I want to go there, too! 　
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Spring, summer, autumn and winter, THESE four seasons make a year. 　
　 Spring is a new season. Flowers are beautiful. Grass is green. Now, the birds are singing again,*改为句号* Today, I am going to the park. THIS is nice. Oh! I am so happy! 　
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