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唯美冰恋(来自 123.150.243.*)于 2015-3-30 18:52:23

对《读《鲁滨孙漂流记》有感》发表评论

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雁玲(来自 183.46.75.*)于 2011-4-14 18:46:00

对《读《鲁滨孙漂流记》有感》发表评论

额，还行，可结尾应该再补充点！

729491819(来自 125.69.59.*)于 2009-8-11 10:07:00

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还行吧，但不足的地方是你没分断落，这样一口气看完是令人乏味的

Z822260589(来自 119.127.190.*)于 2009-3-29 15:23:00

对《读《鲁滨孙漂流记》有感》发表评论

我觉得写得还可以吧！(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……