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(辽宁大连访客)(来自 112.42.25.*)于 2024-11-8 20:27:04   
对《An unforgettable moment》发表评论
【导语】最难忘的?瞬间??是由?数的?瞬间组成的,有令?兴奋的?瞬间,有令?激动的?瞬间,有令?伤?的?瞬间。?瞬间,时间虽不长,但令?难忘。以下是为?家精?整理的内容,欢迎?家阅读。1.难忘的瞬间英语作?That moment is unforgettable in my life. Why, because at that moment, I really felt the value of friendship.When I was a child, I was a bully in my hometown. Many little friends played with me. We "rob the house" every day,which makes the neighbors "chicken fly and dog jump", so the neighbors often "teach" us a lesson. But where will wechange? We still make trouble in groups every day. Finally, the neighbors had no choice but to ignore us. So we playtogether every day. Over time, we don’t feel lonely.Until one day, as soon as I got home, I found my cousin sitting at the table playing a strange "TV". I ran over curiouslyand asked, "what’s this?" my cousin smiled and said to me, "haven’t you seen it? This is your mother’s new computer. It’svaluable!" then I pointed to the games on the screen and said, "look, so many games can be played as you like..." I wasfascinated by this new machine. I couldn’t wait to grab the mouse and play the game. I didn’t go out with my partner that day.Later, I simply took my friends home to play, but I stared at the computerUnknowingly, time flies. I’m going to primary school. My mother moved her registered permanent residence toChengguan. From then on, I went to school in Chengguan and seldom went back to my hometown.One night, when I was doing my homework, my mother complained when she came into the house: "go back to yourhometown and have a look. Every morning, a lot of your friends are blocking the door of my store, which makes my businessimpossible. Go back quickly next week and tell them not to come again." I promised the letter suspiciously.A week later, I got on the bus back to my hometown. Along the way, my heart was always uneasy.After getting off the bus, I hurried to my mother’s shop, but I was really disappointed. There was no friend at the door,only pedestrians were shuttling.I walked to the door of the store. Suddenly, I heard someone calling me behind me. When I looked back, I was stunned.My friends were waiting for me in the store. No wonder my mother would be angry. I happily hugged them. At this time, Iunderstand that only true friendship can be regarded as happiness. This moment will leave a deep mark on my life.2.难忘的瞬间英语作?Maybe that moment comes from the Chunchun teaching of parents, maybe that moment comes from the words ofteachers, maybe that moment comes from the subtle care of friendut the moment on the bus made me unforgettable.In the anxious waiting, I am impatient. "The bus may be very crowded this day. I forgot to say in the morning. You shouldbe carsick and take the next shift.". The mother asked with attention and love. I said impatiently, "whatever". Finally, I got onthe crowded bus. I frowned and turned my head to one side angrily. There’s a seat over there. Go and take it. I didn’t think so.I walked forward and sat down as if nothing had happened. "This is for your mother. Your mother is not in good health," saidthe aunt salesperson next to her. I immediately blushed with shame. Forced by face, I forced out this sentence, "Mom, sitdown.". He didn’t seem to leave his seat. "Sit down by yourself and let him sit down. He’ll get carsick." my mother smiledlovingly. My mother has been ill for more than ten years. As a daughter, I seem to have forgotten this responsibility. Suddenly,in my mind... "Mom, I must be a doctor in the future to treat my mother’s disease." "baby son, you can do whatever you want inthe future, mom doesn’t matter." how did you forget that the mother who lov
爱的极限(来自 222.213.239.*)于 2009-3-7 14:58:00   
对《丹柯随想》发表评论
还行吧,不过语言过于直白,与年级水平不符。
毛毛L(来自 58.49.120.*)于 2009-3-7 14:39:00   
对《雪中情》发表评论
两个字:可以
ZYGPJ(来自 220.191.231.*)于 2009-2-23 11:02:00   
对《梦回童年》发表评论
童年是美好的,
因为有父母和老师的爱护.
XINGXING12(来自 60.213.253.*)于 2009-2-22 9:58:00   
对《梦回童年》发表评论
太有才拉-新手
紫衣仙女(来自 119.184.170.*)于 2009-2-20 19:09:00   
对《梦回童年》发表评论
怀念童年。
全文娓娓道来,你的语句优美,字里行间都表现了你对童年的怀念。
童年,充满着童趣,欢声笑语。 难忘。
小荷编辑部 于 2010-2-20 0:22:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 5)
965789792(来自 116.21.2.*)于 2009-1-31 16:28:00   
对《外面·世界》发表评论
写得很好,太棒了。
灵雨飞絮(来自 116.19.44.*)于 2008-10-11 21:50:00   
对《一个转身的荒诞(转载)》发表评论
支持刘翔,那一个转身是华丽的转身,是伟大的转身!!!!
81010(来自 61.146.11.*)于 2008-8-27 21:53:00   
对《An unforgettable moment》发表评论
比我的长多了!不错!
自由X飞翔(来自 222.89.31.*)于 2008-8-24 11:53:00   
对《依然飞翔》发表评论
keyi
自由X飞翔(来自 222.89.31.*)于 2008-8-24 11:50:00   
对《The Olympic games》发表评论
还行,内容还可以.
廖佳英(来自 116.31.207.*)于 2008-8-15 14:53:00   
对《The Olympic games》发表评论
有些词看不懂
吴镇滔(来自 60.182.93.*)于 2008-8-8 11:50:00   
对《闭着眼,回忆……》发表评论
还不错啊,加油..啊啊...
YUMIAO3363(来自 221.212.145.*)于 2008-7-23 16:49:00   
对《课后随想》发表评论
这还上了作文选????我晕死了
497368048(来自 125.108.50.*)于 2008-7-23 16:27:00   
对《课后随想》发表评论
也不是很好的拉
梦海(来自 123.64.127.*)于 2008-7-21 19:52:00   
对《我心目中的新农村》发表评论
呵呵,作者你心目中的农村还真是一幅人间仙镜画.我也相信只要大家一起努力,那一定会实现的,加油..
YANZELONG(来自 60.214.60.*)于 2008-7-12 10:16:00   
对《地震·随想》发表评论
一滴滴水珠可以拼凑成一片汪洋,一粒粒沙子可以拼凑成一片荒漠。我认为应写为:“一滴滴水珠可以汇成一片汪洋,一粒粒沙子可以积成一片沙漠。


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