全文围绕“趣”来写，中心突出，主题明确！

格式有问题、错误太多，要修改重写。

抄袭的（举报抄袭必须有根据，乱举报会扣分。网址如下）http;//www．caik.jkj．cn/

运用了很多拟人手法

This evening, I invited five friends to have a supper together, just for fun.

Everybody was busy in their experiments this term, and we had little time to stay together to have a talk. Therefore, we longed for such a party several days ago.

We talked about our experiments, majors, supervisors and problems in our lives this evening. I felt extremely relaxed when I told them my recent situation, and to my surprise, their lives in their labs sounded terrible. Why I am interested in communications is that everybody can acquire a considerable amount of useful information from others. For example, I am indeed a lucky one compared to my other classmates.


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形象生动，很好！

这不是原创的

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语言精炼,内容具体,能正确地运用成语.突现了春天校园的美景,有身临其境的感觉.

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真的很精彩,我都身临其境了!

你写得真好，好精彩的比赛啊

我妈妈也这样好！

这篇文章很真挚朴实啊，而且结构严谨，真是一篇好文章哦！
你真幸福哦！

真的是一位好妈妈.

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通过具体的事例,体现了母爱的伟大.我们就要孝敬父母

还不错啊！！！！还好了！！

很不错哦~
以后要学会孝顺啦!!
对妈妈好一点