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依年(来自 183.44.96.*)于 2014-4-4 12:01:20

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虽然长，但有些不符课文的内容。

开心锅(来自 124.229.232.*)于 2013-10-27 10:17:09

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好99.99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999+99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

1091515923(来自 58.252.112.*)于 2013-10-12 19:21:34

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应该把前面的主要内容简单写一写就行了，后面的写的好。不过，没有突出夫妻俩的品质。

贱人贱神(来自 116.17.89.*)于 2013-10-6 21:16:38

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xxxxxxxxxx是续写不是缩写

李蔚阳(来自 60.161.32.*)于 2011-10-9 13:13:00

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好99.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999分加油哦

李蔚阳(来自 60.161.32.*)于 2011-10-9 12:59:00

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还......还好!!!
继续努力
加油
1

WEIWEI1122(来自 60.214.226.*)于 2010-10-17 9:41:00

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写得比我好多了！挺你！嘻嘻。。。。。。

向月葵07(来自 27.190.246.*)于 2010-9-25 17:33:00

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续写不准确

摩亚(来自 58.50.132.*)于 2010-9-24 10:57:00

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好长好长好长好长

非主流CHEN(来自 59.54.77.*)于 2009-10-4 16:52:00

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语无伦次语不达意

曾明(来自 220.176.139.*)于 2009-9-30 20:05:00

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好很好相当好好多字

741539420(来自 121.204.125.*)于 2009-9-26 14:33:00

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写
得
好
99.99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999分

王KHAPPY(来自 118.245.232.*)于 2009-5-1 22:17:00

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写的不认真、太短与年级不符。太长了，看不下去，这不是在写小说

冷冻寂寞(来自 121.12.33.*)于 2009-4-26 15:21:00

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不错，只是前面有点像《金色的鱼钩》

HNKK123456(来自 124.156.118.*)于 2008-10-19 10:17:00

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恩还可以啊！！继续努力啊！！不要让我失望啊！

291044337(来自 59.55.18.*)于 2008-10-12 18:35:00

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糟糕

512689725(来自 58.50.61.*)于 2008-10-3 16:20:00

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不错

LO冰精灵VE(来自 211.136.200.*)于 2008-4-23 21:04:00

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好长哦，还不错

战乱和平鸽(来自 125.92.35.*)于 2008-3-19 19:16:00

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可是可是

438267279(来自 125.93.103.*)于 2007-10-4 11:26:00

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好长啊,不错啊!