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我和Jack叔叔的伊妹儿(三)


汕头市实验学校学校五年级 夏林果

  我叔叔住在美国,我经常给他发e-mail下面是第三封,希望大家欣赏
 
以下是我给叔叔的信   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
Dear Jack,   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  How are you doing? It is so nice to read your  
mail again.  
  Today I see a so lovely lamb at the zoo, I feed  
it some water and leaves. And I hold it. It's so  
soft, I love it very much. I see a dog, it is bark  
to me. I'm so afraid. I think it is so angry. I see  
a giraffe,too.Its neck is very long! Do you like  
these animals?  
  Love ,  
  Dolly  
以下是叔叔的回信  
Hi! Dolly,  
I am doing well. Thank you!  
Wow! you saw so many lovely animals at the zoo. You  
had a good time! Where is the zoo? I don't think it  
was the zoo inside Zhong Shang Park, because it would  
be very difficult for that zoo to take a giraffe. I  
always like nature. I always try to visit zoos,  
botany or aquariums whenever I can. I enjoy watching  
animals or fish.  
I want to change your sentences a little bit:  
"a so lovely lamb", changed to "a very lovely lamb" or  
"a lovely lamb".  
"it is bark to me", changed to "it barks at me".  
Love, Jack  
 
 

 
 
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