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我和Jack叔叔的伊妹儿(二)


汕头市实验学校学校五年级 夏林果

  我叔叔住在美国,我经常给他发e-mail下面是第二封,希望大家欣赏
以下是我给叔叔的信  
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Dear Jack,   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   I'm so miss you. I think you are a best uncle in  
the world. You are kind and funny.   
What's the weather like in California? Is it  
sunny and warm? It's sunny and warm in Shan Tou. Do  
you like spring? i don't like spring, the weather  
is too wet. Which season do you like best ? Do you  
having a good time?  
  See you soon.                            
  Love, Dolly  
以下是叔叔的回信  
Good! You are writing. It is so nice to read you  
mail again. Thank you so much for your nice words on  
me.  
I think the weather in California is similar to the  
weather in Shantou (more precisely, I means the  
weather in my town and the nearby areas). Recently,  
it is sunny and warm, and it will be getting warmer  
and warmer, I think. For me, it seems I enjoy all the  
seasons in California, as we can do different things  
in different seasons. In spring, I like to see the  
colorful flowers and green grasses and trees. In  
summer time, I enjoy water sports. The fall, oh, it  
is favorite season. I feel very comfortable in  
autumn, I have more energy. I can do a lot of  
reading, go shopping or go movies and so on. Then,  
comes the winter, I usually eat a lot of hot and  
spicy foods during this long and cold season.  
Beside working hard, I ofter have a good time with my  
friends, mostly, at weekends.  
your writing is very good, except a tiny little error:  
you can change "Do you having a good time" to "Do you  
have a good time" or "Are you having a good time".  
Love, Jack  
 
 

 
 
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