“But I don’t like thriller.”应该改成“But I don’t like thrillers.”；“I like eggs,broccoli.For lunch,I like rice,apples.For dinner,I like chicken,carrots”应该改成“I like eggs and broccoli.For lunch,I like rice and apples.For dinner,I like chicken and carrots”（中间必须要用and连接）；“I have sister.”应该改成“I have a sister.”；“Her favorite subject is Chinese and math.”应该改成“Her favorite subject are Chinese and math.”；“I have good friend.”应该改成“I have a good friend.”另外，题目不能用“My”。因为“My”后面要加名词。你写了你喜欢的食物、电影、人，结尾不能用“I love my family!”结尾。文中出现了几处的语法错误，要注意。

英文的么？
嗯！挺好的，没有什么语法错误！
不过建议还是写中文的文章比较好！
继续加油，推了！