比思(来自 113.86.196.*)于 2010-2-14 21:55:00
写得挺不错哦，但有一初地方不是很好。a nine students are not afraid of danger to save two fellow students应改为a nine-year-old student isn’t afraid of danger to save two fellow students.
梦瑶紫 于 2010-2-22 16:08:00回复如下：
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谢谢你！
哦，对了，你能不能告诉我 你上几年级了？
