sample for band 4
application report (a)
dear sir,
i am a business management learner in shanghai, and my english is ok. my future job (in a certain shanghai firm of shoe-making) demands more and better management expertise and english knowledge, so i am thinking of a course in your school.
i learned my lessons at school very well and i passed business english tests and all english examinations. and my computer operation is first-rate.
i enjoy a large circle of friends for my nice temper and humor. i have a strong love for sports and a strong responsibility for whatever i think i should do. that`s why my friends and teachers like me.
a friend in london told me about your school recently. he said yours has the best teachers of management and business, among other things. and is there anyone that hates london, where your school is?
i am young and single. i have a clever head and readiness for all hardship that is necessary for the degree that lies ahead. i know what i am going to do.
let me hear from you as soon as possible. thank you.
yours
sample for band 6
application report (b)
dear sir/madam,
i am asking to be a student of teaching methodology in your school as yours is well known in this aspect.
i have been teaching english in a middle school in beijing for three years. i never get bored with my job or my students. i delight a great deal in making interesting lessons more interesting, and making boring lessons less so. so i have been keen on ways to improve my teaching, by reading nunan, harper, and widdowson and attending
foreign teachers` lectures.