There are three people in my family,My mother is a teacher,She is nice,She likes cooking,My father is a boss,He is tall,He likes playing football,I am a student,I am no tall, I like singing,I love my family very much.
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There are three people in my family. My mother is a teacher, and she is nice. She likes cooking. My father is a boss of a company, and he is tall. He likes playing football. I am a student, but I am not tall. I like singing. I love my family very much.
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