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My friend


魔法学校2年级 夏阳

  第一次用英文写短文可能有好多问题,但是我坚持还是把它投了进去。大家不要笑话哦~
  Long long time ago,she and me knowed each other,that time when i was six and she was seven.  
  She is very kind to others and she is also very beautiful.She has long and black hair,a pair of bright eyes like the moon on the sky,a big nose and a small mouth.She said she is glad to be my friend,she stays with me never feels boring and i was very happy when i hear about those that what she said.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I wishes everything goes well during she and me.      小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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