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生活纪实(English)


孤寂残风
E-mail:qusheng1119@yahoo.com.cn

  本人第一次用英语记日记,记录了当天的惊险一幕,我尝试用倒装句和虚拟语气,如果有错误帮我指出,在下感激不尽
August 5th Saturday          Fine  
 It is Saturday today.I didn't get up as early as usual.Ather I finished my homework,having gone swimming in the pool.I think I could siwm myself without any help.Not until the moment I say"helping me!"did I realize how thickheaded I was.The coach gave me a buoy as soon as she found me.I had been saved at last.I thoughtI was so frightened that I failed.If I had had more confidence,I should succeed.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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