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  Hamburgers is my favourite food
        My favourite food  
  My favourite food is hamburgers.    小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I is  very like  there .  can we but there .  
  Hamburgers have vitamin A.C.D and there can give me some energy. but eat enough hamburgers is not very helthy .  
  Hamburgers is my favourite food .   
  what do you like?  
                ——我是新手 写得不好得话 还请多多指导  
 
 
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