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Six years. Past..


永兴县先锋小学216班 Daenmon

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The desire for finally realized that the expected arriveal of summer finally arrived, but not the taste, I finally graduated. In elementary school life six become an unforgettable experience. There was  
(A)a lesson which left a deep impression on me. Then (graduated)graduating from a period of time, the teacher asked us to write a composition "graduate". The second lesson, the teacher screened many compositions, and (make)made the students read platform. I've seen the teacher -- this is one of the largest task(任务) to (chosen)chose good compositions. There It is www.zww.cn nets arriving composition   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
Listening to an article and article "voice", we are taken by the articles. The tears is for unforgettable. We cried and read not bottom go to, the teacher helps us to read. Unexpectedly, the teacher also (cry)cried. Glasses through the eyes, it is touched tears. Despite this, but the teacher is still (smile)smiling finishing our composition. ThereIt is www.zww.cn nets arriving composition  
This damn "tears as a" constantly bud growth. Seeing our beloved classroom,it suddenly became like saying bye. Wipe tears to the students, the time of dry. Tears drenched sleeves. Suddenly, I finally feel "time flies." I hate the time of cruelty. Why, why do you always keep to appreciate the beautiful scenery. Useless, the time will not be stopped. Because of this, I never listen, do better, want to leave a good impression of teacher, The unity and more… There  
we soon gracefully.I don't spend and "Alma mater", "teacher" and "students" time together. Facing the graduation tests of pressure… We spent three days, waiting for the achievements of his Alma mater, to know. This is a real respectively, true. Don't know what time can also (came)come when Alma mater, can still (sitting)sit in front of the classroom. Once a gardener, from commencement day, we left the last two good teacher, I can no longer do back to their students. But still, I will remember you have (is)been my teacher in primary school graduating class. The trees in the school recorded my life of six rings, and this is my memorial to the Alma mater. There  
Goodbye, my dear Alma mater! Goodbye, my respected teacher. Goodbye, lively alumni! You give me a better side, your smile makes time to stay in my memory card, I will never forget you have! -
 
 
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作文id:409638 来源:原创 字数:1935 投稿日期:2009-8-11 16:06:00 点击:
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你很勇敢而且很优秀,希望你继续努力。特别是在语法和词组上可以多注意一些,文笔很好,加油~---- By 小荷 2009-8-19 1:22:51

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