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My brther


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  I have a smart brother,he is kind to everyone,but sometimes he doesn’t。
   I have a smart brother,he is kind to everyone,but sometimes he doesn’t。He often think he is cool ,but I don’t. My brther has medium height . He is thin, but he can sing and dance。He has short straight black hair and tow small eyes。 he likes playing basketball, but I think it’s boring .I like playing  
  computer games, he likes too. His favourite sports is swim, he can’t swim very well.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  This is my brother , a nighty boy.Do you want to make friend with him.

 
 
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