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I like swimming


陈经纶中学分校 苏麟

  I can made many friends because of the same hobby.My favourite celebrity is Guojingjing. I want to be a swimmer. when I grow up. I will learn harder!
  My favourite hobby is swimming. When I was 6 years old, my parents and I drove car to Dalian,because it was a lovely and beautiful coastal city. It is in the northeast of china. The air was freasher than Beijing and Shanghai. There isn’t too much traffic. People there are very fiendly. The street is very clean. You feel good when you walk alone the beach. Beautiful trees and flowers are araund you. Have you ever been to Dalian?  
  We drove to the sea next day. There were many trees and flowers around you,and some boats slowly moved on the sea. I put on my new swimming trunks ,but I was very scared when I wanted to jump into the sea, I hesitated for many times. I stood on the bank. Suddenly my father pushed me into the water. I “drank” a lot of water when I was in the sea. My father jumped in to the water and help me. I was very afraid of the sea because I swam in the sea for the first time. My father taught me how to swim breaststroke, and try to ran out the swimming circle’s air. I learned very fast. Soon,I could swim by myself, and I can move forward. I felt very hapy,when I swam in the endless sea. I enjoyed swimming from then. Can you swim?   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  When we came back to beijing, my parents and I went to a swimming boost class. We learnt freestyle swimming. We had the same teacher, And we also had a competition. I lerent hard the my parents. One month later, I was the fastest in my family ,my father was faster than my mom, my mother was the slowliest.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  I often go swimming with my parents on weekends. I usually swim in the swimming pool, because it is safer than in the sea. I think swimming is good for our health, and helps us keep good shape. I can made many friends because of the same hobby.My favourite celebrity is Guojingjing. I want to be a swimmer. when I grow up. I will learn harder!

 
 
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