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My good friend


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  Hello! Today is nice and warm! My name is Zheng Han Bai,I have a good friend..
 Hello! Today is nice and warm! My name is Zheng Han Bai ,I have a good friend.His name is Dou Dao Xin.Dou Dao Xin and I study in the same primary school.  
 Dou Dao Xin 13 years old,and I 11 years old.Dou Dao Xin very like playing computer games,but his father doesn’t like Dou Dao Xin play computer games,pitiful Dou Dao Xin!   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 Dou Dao Xin has two big eyes,one small mouth,a small nose and two ears,he is a beautifully boy.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 Dou Dao Xin is very warm-hearted and he always help me.We are all good friend.

 
 
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