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My father


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  懂得英语的同学进来看看吧,刚刚写的作文。不要介意我没写翻译哦,(*^__^*)...嘻嘻指出错误给“5分”写的好也给我分哦
   "Get up and go hiking with me”My father always says to me every morning.Though I hate going hiking,I must get up early and go hiking with my father.  
  My father loves sports because he wants to be healthy.“I was thinner than you when I was 15.”He always says to me.He was thin before,but now,he is the strongest of my family.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  My father is also very strict with me.He always says to me:"English is very useful,you must work hard at it.You can listen English everyday,it can improve your English study.And if you have a difficult question,you may do it as well as possible.”I think that my father very smart.And I always try my best to learn English well.Now,I am good at English.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  My father is not only strict,but also he is kind.  
  The other day,I had a high fever.My father was very worried about me.He took me to rush to the hospital as quickly as possible.He was excited when he heard"He will be all right very soon”.I thought that my father is very kind.  
  I am very glad to have a great father.And I am very proud of him.I just want to say:“I love my father so much.”

 
 
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