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My family【修改篇】


莪祗是一個孤單德孩子`、waitfor 浅夏。

  这篇英语作文经过13姐帮我修改后我再重新发一次哒!
  There are four people in my family . They are my father, mother ,my brother and myslf.  
  My father is a manager,he works in a company. I admire him very much , he's the man in our family. My mother does not work , she is a housewife. She does all the cooking and cleaning .Sometimes ,she often cooks nice food with her friend. My sister is a college student ,I am a student too , I attend NO.5 Primary School.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   I will always love my family, because they are my dear family.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
ps:这篇英语作文我在以前的就ID写过了。但是有许多错误,13姐帮我修改过了。现在我再重新发给大家看。  
  地址:http://www.zww.cn/zuowen/html/35/271706.htm  
    
  

 
 
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