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My dream home


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My dream home is very large. There are at least twenty rooms. It has three floors. I have a big party and many restaurants on the ground floor. I also have a computer room and an art room. They are very bright and are on the ground floor. There are other rooms are on the first and second floors.  
On the first floor. I have a big sitting room, a reading room, a computer room, a balcony and my own bedroom. I have a big bed in my owm bedroom. It is very comfortable and I very love it.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
There is a bathroom with four showers and two baths on the second fioor. There is also a big bedroom, a big reading room, a dining room and a kitchen.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
I also have a big garden. It has many different kinds of flowers. I love it very much.  
What do you think of my dream home?

 
 
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